Wednesday, December 3, 2008


The young man's main problem is that he want to learn how to carve elephants.For example, he always want to learn carve elephants. Another example, he goes to a old man to teach him how to carve elephants.A third example.is that he learn how to carve stones not elephants.Clearly, the young man's main problem is that he want to learn how to carve elephants.

The problem is resolved that the old man teach the young man how to carve stones.For example,
People from all over the world came to that out-of-the-way village deep in the mountains to buy the old mans elephants.Another example,is that he knows how to carve stones. A third example, is that he young man learned that there was much more he had not known about carving stone. For that reason, the problem is resolved that the old man teach the young man how to carve stone.
What would happen to the young man in the future is that he would know how to carve elephants.For example, he already know how to carve stones. Another example is that the old man told him that he know more about carve stone in this season.A third example is that he wants to learn more and he want to do another year with him to learn more.Evidently,
What would happen to the young man in the future is that he would know how to carve elephants.

4 comments:

Kelvin 605 said...

Dear Mariland

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces

Tammy 605 said...

Dear Marylin

I like your blog post because it was good and interesting. The best part was the third paragraph One suggestion is nothing because it was so good

Amy 605 said...

Dear marilyn,

I like your blogs post because the picture matches your story

the best part is when you explain and gave example

one suggestion is to put a period at the end of your sentaces

sincerely amy ortiz

Suleny 605 said...

i like your essay cause you put a lot of good ideas bye latinanena

sencerely, sUlEnY